Production 2: Peer Critique

http://schmitt7.wordpress.com/2014/05/12/alfred-state-pd-project/

If the comment isn’t accepted yet, here it is now:

“The overall timing is quite good up until the the camera is zooms in on the 5. The camera hangs around a bit too long before it does the zoom, and during the zoom the weight of the lines around the 5 get heavier while also getting darker. The text could also stand to appear just a tad bit faster, and if that is done then the amount of time after that were the camera sits can be cut down a bit as well.”

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